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Your article didn't explain why a call was placed to emergency dispatchers, or by whom. So while you informed readers of an apparent suicide, you didn't report what initially prompted the police standoff.
Of the who, what, where, when, why of journalism, you missed the who and why -- two important and basic elements of a news story.
Jude Noland
Walla Walla
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